IETLS EXAMEN- BAND 3 - PREPARATION- GRANOLLERS

Cell phones are an amazing change in our lives. You can be connected all the time. However, whereas you are driving, it is too dangerous that you are talking by cell phone.
The discovery of cell phones was amazing. The first mobiles that people used were very big; also, before you start a conversation, you need to remove the antenna, it was very funny. However, this device allows you to keeping communicated all the time, no matter where do you are or what are you doing. Nowadays, thanks to evolution, cellular phones are littler, wireless, and have not antennas, in addition, they have more functions.
Thus, the new phones have more utilities. For instance ,you can be connected by internet through your phone in every moment. You can send images, photos, files, even print documents with your phone to a blue tooth print. Other applications of the cellular phones is camera, you can take pictures, videos and put on the web immediately. The last functions of these devices are “the apps”; you can download these applications and you can see a lot of games, books, restaurants, almost at the moment among others activities allow you than you feel more comfortable and efficient. 

But, you can drive your car and talk by phone at the same time. When you drive a car, you have a huge responsibility. Why? Because you and your car maybe could be a lethal weapon if you don´t use with responsibility. Namely, if you are driving on your car, you are not only going from one side to other, but also you get a very high speed. For this reason, you can suffer a crash accident and hurt yourself or another innocent people. Therefore, you need focus on the road while you are driving. This is the main way to prevent a car accident. Moreover, if you are driving and doing other activity as calling, eating, drinking, reading, etc, you have been losing you attention on the road by 60%. thus, you have more probabilities to make more mistakes or even a car accident and change your life or another’s.

In conclusion, cellular phones and driving a car are beautiful activities for everybody, but on not account, you can´t mix these activities if you don´t want to have an accident and exposure you to change your style life by anything worse. My advice is that you can use a hand free to answer only the important calls that you have, the rest, wait to arrive a safe place to answer.

correction: 


you are talking by cell phone. = you  talk by cell phone.


before you start a conversation, you need to remove the antenna, it was very funny.= before you started a conversation, you needed to remove the antenna, it was very funny.


his device allows you to keeping communicated all the time = this device allows you   keeping communicated all the time


no matter where do you are = no matter where you be

you can be connected by internet through your phone in every moment. = you can be connected to internet through your phone in every moment.


even print documents with your phone to a blue tooth print. = even print documents with your phone on a bluetooth printer. 


Other applications of the cellular phones is camera, you can take pictures, videos and put on the web immediately. = Other applications of the cellular phones is the camera with which you can take pictures, videos and upload on the web immediately.


you can see a lot of games, books, restaurants, almost at the moment among others activities allow you than you feel more comfortable and efficient. = you can almost see  lots  of games, books, restaurants  at the moment and among others activities that  allow you   feeling  more comfortable and efficient. 

But, you can drive your car and talk by phone at the same time. When you drive a car, you have a huge responsibility.  = But, you can not drive your car and talk by phone at the same time. When you drive a car, you have a huge responsibility. 




if you don´t use with responsibility. = if you don´t use with it responsibility.


you need focus on the road while you are driving. = you need to focus on the road while you are driving.


you have been losing you attention on the road by 60% = you have lost your attention on the road by a 60%


but on not account, you can´t mix these activities if you don´t want to have an accident and exposure you to change your style life by anything worse.  = but ,on no account, you can´t mix these activities;  if you don´t want to have an accident and change  over  your lifestyle to anything worse. 


wait to arrive a safe place to answer. = wait until to arrive a safe place to answer.