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University college is very expensive. Students need a lot of money if they want to continue studying. This report is about the new laws for college loans in US.
Students who keep their studies in universities are very expensive in most countries of the world. 


However, there are pathways for these kind of people for obtain money to this goal. One of the most common way to earn money is working. Whereas you have a part time work, you can study. Other manner to obtain money consist to talk with your parents, if they are agree with you, they give you a money to support you. In addition, another ask for grants or loans.

The new laws health care by president Obama helps to these students through the federal loan program. With this law, the president intends to give more loan for american residents and foreign persons with legal permanent. Thus, the law aims two objetives. in one hand, it could save 61 millions of dollars in ten years, on the second hand, it allows that more students can go at American Universities. Also, He reduces the payment time to 20 years ( 5 years less).

In summary, The new law espected to benefit more residents local and out who wish get a 4 years college through the new federal student loan program. Therefore, they can study today and they can pay later, because you need time to study and money meanwhile.

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University college is very expensive. Students need a lot of money if they want to continue studying. This report is about the new laws for college loans in US. 
Students who keep their studies in universities are very expensive in most countries of the world.

This report is about the new laws for college loans in US.( topic sentence )

This report is about the new laws for college loans.University college is very expensive, that's why,  students need a lot of money;  if they want to continue studying in it . Studies in Universities are   expensive in most countries of the world  

there are pathways for these kind of people for obtain money to this goal. = there are ways for these kinds of people as to obtain money to this goal.

Other manner to obtain money consist to talk with your parents = Other manner to obtain money consist of  talking  with your parents

if they are agree with you,= if they are agreed with you,

another ask for grants or loans. = another asks for grants or loans.

The new laws health care by president Obama helps to these students through the federal loan program. With this law, the president intends to give more loan for american residents and foreign persons with legal permanent. = The new  health care laws by president Obama help these students through the federal loan program. With this law, the president intends to give more loan for american residents and foreign persons with legal permanent residency.

He reduces the payment time to 20 years ( 5 years less). = ( the law ) it reduces the payment time to 20 years ( 5 years less).

 The new law espected to benefit more residents local and out who wish get a 4 years college through the new federal student loan program. =  The new law expected to benefit more local residents  and out who wish get a 4 years college through the new federal student loan program.