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Agriculture is very important to provide food to human and animals. Fertilizer helps to improve the crops. There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors.

     Fertilizer contains phosphorus and nitrogen. It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. For this reason, quantities of fertilizer are very important because in one hand it can sure a big crop, on the other hand, keep control the pollution.

But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate. It is necessary to take into account the weather. Is not the same the desert to the cold places. Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?

     In conclusion, the main factors that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil and the fertilizer. Thus, agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant. It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings.




Correction :

pathway ( noun )

a path that you can walk on

There was a narrow pathway leading down the cliff.

a series of nerves that information travels along

neural pathways

 There are many pathways to improve cultivates = There are many ways to improve cultivates

it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors.=it depends on the amount of fertilizers and another factors.

It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. =It makes better growing of  plants by  themselves and bigger.

 For this reason, quantities of fertilizer are very important because in one hand it can sure a big crop, on the other hand, keep control the pollution =For this reason, quantities of fertilizers are very important, because, in one hand ,it can assure a great crop, on the other hand, keep control over the pollution



But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate = But, not only the fertilizer is important, also There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivation

Is not the same the desert to the cold places. Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. = It is not the same the desert on  cold places, humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map.

  Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?  =   . Finally, we can say that it is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant.



 the main factors that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil and the fertilizer = the main factors that help you get better crops depend on the composition of the soil and the fertilizers

agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant. =agriculturalist  must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to be poured in the land  and for what kind of plant.

 It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings.=It would be great to these techniques would be known around the world to produce more food for human beings.
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