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Agriculture is very important to provide food to human and animals. Fertilizer helps to improve the crops. There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors.

     Fertilizer contains phosphorus and nitrogen. It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. For this reason, quantities of fertilizer are very important because in one hand it can sure a big crop, on the other hand, keep control the pollution.

But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate. It is necessary to take into account the weather. Is not the same the desert to the cold places. Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?

     In conclusion, the main factors that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil and the fertilizer. Thus, agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant. It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings.

Corrections :

There are many pathways to improve cultivates; it depends of the amount of fertilizer and another factors. = There are many ways to improve cultivation; it depends on the amount of fertilizers and another factors.

It make better growing of the plants by it selves and longer. = It makes the plants to grow better by themselves and last longer  

However, when you put a lot of this chemical in the ground, its water and air suffer pollution. =However, when you pour  a lot of this chemical over the ground, its water and air suffer from pollution.

it can sure a big crop = it can asssure a big crop

keep control the pollution.= keep control over the pollution.

 But, not only the fertilizer is important. There are other characteristics to produce a big, long and healthy cultivate It is necessary to take into account the weather. = But, not only the fertilizer is important, also  other factors such as the weather, the quality of water which help to  produce a big, long and healthy cultivation

Is not the same the desert to the cold places. = It is not the same the desert or  cold places.

The mistake here is the puntuaction mark:

Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant ?     = Humidity, rains, winds, localization of the land in the map  must be taken in account. Finally, we can say that is very important what kind of vegetables you will plant.

    that help you get better crops depend of the composition of the soil =  that help you get better crops depend on the composition of the soil

agricultures must have knowledge how many fertilizers need to the land for what kind of plant = Agriculturalist must have knowledge of how many fertilizers are needed for a  land and  what kinds of plant can be sowed.

It would be great to this techniques would be knowledge around the world to produce more food for human beings. = It would be great  these techniques would be known around the world as to produce more food for human beings.

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